Autumn is dying tonight
Its cries sounding amid the deluging droplets
drumming ceaselessly upon the roof above my head
Of all the season’s
it seems the cruelest death is reserved for autumn
Winter wanes into resplendent rebirth
Spring swings joyfully into summer
like a child on a garden gate
And summer surrenders gracefully
colorfully closing its pages
dying a hero’s death
mourned by all who knew her
But autumn dies alone
Like a once proud lady who has outlived her children
knowing all along she was never anyone’s first choice
She was the friend of the girl everyone admired
Tagging along in summer’s shadow
she made the best of her hand-me-down’s
smiled when she should, and always said the right things
She settled for what she could get
made the best of what she was left with
invested everything she could into her inheritance
and didn’t complain
Now, alone and defenseless
she faces the rising winds
creeping frosts and long dark nights
without even an erstwhile suitor for company
She gathers the few remaining tatters she owns
folds her hands over her breast
and allows the snows to cover her
her tears freezing
before they even fall.
Blaise Brown.
NB: To share some words written by Blaise, because I was just thinking about him and remembering this baby he once gave to me for 'safe keeping'.
Sunday, 8 November 2009
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Such beautiful heart rendering words. Saraha, I'm truly sorry to read about your dear friend. Take care TFxx
Beautifully written, although Autumn is my first choice and with the death of summer/autumn the Celtic New Year is born allowing us hope of a kinder new year and rebirth in Spring xJ
Sarah, that is so amazing. Truly Blaise lives on in his words.....The mental picture I got was of a beautiful, ethereal, gothic fairy tale creature---melancholy and bittersweet. Thank you so much for sharing this treasure with us. Wishing you love, peace & Blessings!!
Brilliant. Had a good trawl through the poems all good hope you are well...
Wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing.
xoxoxo
Saraha,
Beautiful poem!! Blaise will live on. Thanks for sharing his work with us!!
-Alex
We can choose to respond and react to the outside world as if it had a hold on us, or we can express our inner most selves in this moment by feeling our way into the future, bringing to us exactly the dreams that we project with each breath we take. We can find our own voice when we realize that we can not take the external world seriously. By not participating in the outer world, one brings to the world the authenticity of one's own true Nature. This is Genius.
Your beloved friend's words are in safe keeping in the bright warm company of your Babies. The wind and the rain can not harm them there.
beautiful...thanks for sharing!
Wonderful imagery and understanding of the season, my favorite. Thank you for sharing this.
Loved it, thank you
My first reaction was that this is very much unlike you in structure. Still, I can feel your effect in these beautiful words! Keep writing!!!
Saraha- It's amazing how much alike your writing is. I thought it was you. Clearly you influenced each other well. But Autumn was always my first choice, as was the shadow of popularity. Beautiful, Kiddo. I'm trying to imagine the beauty of you two sharing a moment. I think it's out of reach. Take care~rick
Beautiful words:)
beautiful ... i got lost reading this.
thanks for sharing
tc
mY dearest sweetest SarahA, I to thought this was your writing. This made me cry, I know it must have been hard for you to read and post this.
I to like Autumn, but it does have sadness for me in many ways, yet I feel it is also one fo the calmess, most serene seasons for me.
I know your dear friend is smiling down at you on this Autumn morning, where the leaves are blowing gently, hint of crispness in the air.
Spring swings joyfully into summer
like a child on a garden gate
Swing forward on this gate of sweetess memories, swing with love and joy, swing with no fears, just happiness, CHILDLIKE!!
Sniffles.. wishing you much blessings and peace. love always
Brilliant writing. TY SarahA for sharing BB's love and wonderful words with us :}
cool stuffs indeed
Autumn is just barely here in central California. All my trees have most their leaves and have not yet turned the full spectrum of fall. T-shirts, shorts and flip-flops are still the uniform and I am waiting, waiting, waiting...for the full death of summer.
Ah, November...
As VickY above said, I, too, got lost in the reading of it. This is a breathtakingly beautiful poem. And that these words are in your keeping... well, that's beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing this.
Fascinating, the death of Autumn!
I don't recall reading his work, I know, I was under a rock. :) Googling now to slap myself. Thank you so much for introducing me. I love his words!
lovely words and a gorgeous image with intriguing contrasts; all of this is nicely done.
sorry to hear about the loss of your friend. Rebirth is just moments away and already glorious in its anticipation by those awaiting!
stu pidasso
So gorgeous! Thank you for sharing...
painting words to cover the void........
I could not bear to love one sister less than another. Feeling alone does not necessarily make one so. Yet may all feelings be honoured - whether frozen tears melt into spring rivulets, or remain encrusted forever as diamonds.
Dear Sarah,
I'm sorry I've been away so long, and I'm so sorry to hear of your loss, this is a truly beautiful poem...
Love Emma.
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